I can't tell you how upset and disappointed I am to have received the video, almost completely unchanged.
I watched the videos side by side and there was hardly any difference.
This is absolutely ridiculous now. I am simply not happy with the result at all and extremely frustrated now. This is not what I requested in the briefing before the wedding, and again in a follow up email right after the wedding. It has now been an entire year since our wedding!
Please look through the changes again and send the revised video to me within 24 hours as a matter of priority!
In the very beginning, please change the @ to 'at' the Silavadee, and make the date bigger to be the same size.
Please put all scenes in order of occurrence (girls and boys getting ready first, then veil covering, then coming down aisle, then ceremony, then reception). Beach shots can go in between. At the moment, it jumps way too much between all the different aspects of the wedding, and it does not show a story for the viewer. I discussed this with you before the wedding, but it still did not turn out the way we wanted.
Please also include footage of the boys getting ready, and some more of bridesmaids getting ready too.
Include the clip of the boys coming down the stairs for the veil covering in the villa.
Include a shot of signing the wedding contract at the veil covering in the villa.
Include the clip of The groom placing the veil down on the bride during the veil covering in the villa.
Include a shot of all the kids (flower girls and boys) coming down the aisle.
For the voice over of the marriage celebrant, please change it to: 0:34:59-0:36:12. And start with a shot of the celebrant as he begins speaking, and then move to other shots while he finishes talking as a voice over. During the reception dinner, please add a few more seconds to the beginning of the grooms speech: from 2:30:25. And please include this section from the brides speech: 2:24:53-2:25:17 as a voice over.