- The topic is quite suitable to the content of the story, because it is about the disadvantages of using social media in a way that is not appropriate, and it can be dangerous for those who lack of the knowledge and understanding to use social media.
- The content in the topic sentence that talks about the advantages that social media is a great way to connect with friends, which contrast to the thesis statement and the topic of this story that only talk about the disadvantages.
If the topic sentence is appropriate to the story, we should add content to rhyme, such as social media is a great way to connect with friends for many reasons; on the other hand, it has many disadvantages if we have a lack of knowledge and understanding to use social media properly.