It’s a good essay, due to the The first body paragraph discusses the advantages of cloning humans, and then the second body paragraph looks at the problems associated with this,Which are the supporting idea of the thesis statement. Makes the essay more credible. And writing that is concise, not complicated, arranging the content order and explaining the content clearly make the readers easily understand. Also the content of these paragraph consistent with introduction paragraph, even though it is well written but there are no examples to explain in order to understand more.